Thursday, 21 March 2013

We have been writing descriptions that paint a picture in our readers' minds.Can you guess what we have written about?


Sheldon the Turtle

Sheldon looks like a bomb when he tucks himself inside his shell. His tail looks like a sharp end of a sword.  His colour is yellow and brown. Sheldon blows bubbles out of his mouth when he is in the water. He looks scaly like a fish.
Sheldon the turtle feels like a rock. Sheldon’s back feels smooth and scaley
Sounds like a snake “ssssssssssssssssssss.”
Sheldon smells like a wild hippo.

By Henry

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